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Jsmorris
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finally a place/site where i can get some feedback yesssssss people actually take the time ti read your work

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my desire to love you(w.a.y.r.awy)

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romance

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my desire  to love you is but  a dull ache in the ever widening chasm of my heart  i have no idea how to reach you anymore and  that's where the sorrow starts  my heart bleeds for you every  time  you disregard me the chasm gets bigger and   the  ache becomes less and less dull it's like a blistering sore that refuses to heal see what you did no one  can ever undo u ***ed up and showed me your good side  then made me love you

why are you running away from my heart  why must you allow yourself  to contribute  to the pain that keeps this dull ache alive the ned for  you is  great so great  that i'm screaming out    as the pain and  desire  grown im screaming for  you  shrieks of  sorrow and  pain i need you   stop running and  love me  wahat's wrong with me  why  must you be so hard to get to i need u  please help!

its  hurts so much to be rejected the pain  gets deeper with  every passing day  so make this easy  for both of  us and  stop running  please stay

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2b2b2 says:

Well Played....ONE
 

darylg44 says:

Pain expressed....Nicely done
 

jsmorris says:

thanks guys

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