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The moon is still, quietness not a stir, unwilled, my thoughts turn to her, I am like a sailor lost at sea, emotionless and carefree, the very thought of her draws me, like a moth to a flame, I am caught up in her game, my pillow I hold broken and uncontrolled, dying without her everyday so I perish in loves way, with her was bitter sweet, but unique, I had peace now I am wishing I was in her life atleast, if only as a friend, lets not pretend, once lovers no man will ever be a friend again, feelings arise, please dont act surprised, there is so much leading on, this whole realationship is over and torn, shattered like all the rest, but our time was beloved your in my chest, it will never be as before, but I will cntinue to love you forevermore, seeking passion with eager eyes like mine to hold, to dine in love only for the asking which time expose, it's a pity love feels me now, with desire I turn to you but can't tell you how, my mind keeps thinking WoW

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love_supreme says:

This is an excellent write.

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2b2b2 says:

Tight Write.....Bravo.....ONE

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