TwistedBeauty
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CATEGORY
life
i begin
and
somewhere in the middle it just ends
i feel its incomplete
i set it aside thinking
i'll come back to it
the poem just sits in my notebook unfinished
the feeling isnt there anymore
i guess that was it way this one ends
years pass and i havent made progress
loose leaf paper crumbled tossed in a folder
tucked away in a bag
never to see the light of day again
until i feel like finishing
what i started long ago
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COMMENTS
ms.poeticpassion says: I like this....I have many poems unfinished. Then I go back and read them and be like hmmmm..maybe that is the way it is suppose to end. It sounds better after I let it marinate for a Lil while lol |
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ms.poeticpassion says: I like this....I have many poems unfinished. Then I go back and read them and be like hmmmm..maybe that is the way it is suppose to end. It sounds better after I let it marinate for a Lil while lol |
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twistedbeauty says: Yes I have a few hundred laying around lol I had a poem from 5 years ago that I just finished last week |
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hymnagen says: I can definitely relate, The piece I posted today was one I revisited to complete from the first 3 lines. You really captured it well |
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