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"Don't just think it, Ink It!!!!"

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Just A Thought #2:

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Yesterday I was listing to a friend talk about life,

 then came a thought, I had to write it down.

When I told my friend about this thought,

he looked up at me with a frown.

He didn't seem to understand what I was saying,

so I had to repeat it so he can understand.

A mule, a horse both can carry heavy loads

on their backs.....

You can weigh the pack saddles down, Which

I find pretty impressive.

But hardly does anyone pay attention,

to what really keeps that load from toppling over.

A Cinch; held tight by a very small buckle.

Our ride in life isn't that different,

the load we carry may be our family,

our finances, our health perhap.

We just don't have to worry about the load,

if our buckle cinched tight a lot like faith.

Gitty up..........

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KingQadarDwon' says:

Nice write... Awesome message....
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2b2b2 says:

SUPERB....ha ha....ONE

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mrmelody7 says:

Nice write Mz tretre, carry your own load if you wanna get ahead, when things get rough a little prayer will get you by

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