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HymnAgen
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lightness in the dark
Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way

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Anyway

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life

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A transgression

A confession

An admitted

indiscretion

 

Crying eyes

soon realize

denial offers

no protection

 

from the pain

Forever changed

but a deep love

still remains

 

Do you leave

or do you stay?

But I want you anyway

 

Is what you feel

but haven’t spoken

Though the trust

you had is broken

 

Sunken heart

pumps angry words

but the truth is

you’re still hoping

 

you can save this

Friends advise

you treat every

word as lies

 

Start anew

and you agree

‘til that “Forgive me”

note arrives

 

Now unsure

Emotions raw

when that knock’s

heard at your door

 

in your head

the voices say

but I want you anyway

 

Go away

Just go away

Please go away

 

- HymnAgen

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Alekia Abeni says:

It's like you've gotten a hold of my diary....... Beautiful piece! I love it!

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2b2b2 says:

TIGHT....SNAPS....ONE
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Charles2 says:

tough call. always have to look at it both ways ...and by the way reap what you so cards are in play. great write...
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hymnagen says:

Alekia Abeni, you gonna make me blush. Thanks!

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hymnagen says:

2b, as my Houston homie would say, "Allll-ready!"
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hymnagen says:

C2, you're right, there is always more at play, but sometimes you find the poetry in a particular moment. Thanks much, brotha
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Corey says:

A familiar moment in time...feeling this piece soul deep! Nicely done!

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hymnagen says:

Indeed, it is a universal experience. thank you for your feedback, Corey. Here is a link to the spoken version of this piece: http://headroominations.blogspot.com/2015/10/anyway.html
 

love_supreme says:

I can definitely feel this one. Excellent write.

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