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TwistedBeauty
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lightness in the dark
i havent posted in a while but im still around

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walking...

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we got new flooring today it's made of eggshells 

it's really uncomfortable but you said you like it and what you say goes 

now matter how uncomfortable it makes me 

you don't see anything wrong with how the eggshells prick your feet with no shoes on 

you said i have to get use to it or wear shoes 

who wears shoes all day inside of their own house?

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The Immortal Wize says:

This is so metaphorically, profoundly mastered. I have walk on many of those kind of floors, believe me life does get better after the pain.

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