I tried to write about love and hope,
But the words just didn't flow,
I understand what I'm supposed to do, but my mind still said no,
My mood is stuck on pissed, and I can't change the channel,
My heart used to be like clay, now it's as hard as enamel,
That just leaves my soul and conscience,
Like two old men holding conference,
Playing Chess in the park,
Slow and wise, with one move, they provide a spark,
To my brain to find the reason and beauty in things,
And motivate my heart to listen when the world sings,
My mood follows suit, based on the rest of my body's proof,
And suddenly I'm writing again, smiling, and speaking the truth.
WarriorCarryingWater
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Kingqadardwon' says: Dope as usual.. Amazingly lyrical... Congrats on your trophy, you deserved that. You been holding the vibe down.. |
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2b2b2 says: Fantastic Capture |
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WarriorCarryingWater says: Thanks Kingqadardwon |
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WarriorCarryingWater says: Thanks 2b2b2!poems by this commentor |
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after vision says: my poet, it is amazing what comes to flood ones drought |
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WarriorCarryingWater says: Thanks after vision! |
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jlmoore2 says: Keep writing! |
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WarriorCarryingWater says: Thanks jlmoore2! |
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The Immortal Wize says: Congratulations!!! Well deserved... Keep the fire burning. |
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WarriorCarryingWater says: Thank you Wize Dom! |
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chrisj21390 says: this is dope bro!!! |
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WarriorCarryingWater says: Thanks chrisj21390! |
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woven says: Love the rhythm, the rhyme, and how flowing your truth felt so genuine. A belated congratulations, well done! |
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jlmoore2 says: Love the flow and the sentiment. |
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WarriorCarryingWater says: Thanks jlmoore2! |
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love_supreme says: Excellent write. |
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