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The Message of the PLANETS

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Have you ever thought of the eight PLANETS?

Earth is the Third that depends on the SUN

Their order and symbols are Eternal

To be human?  They show how to be one.

 

Number One is our Mental MERCURY

Creation gave us a Brain & Mind first

Impressions from thinking form Craters

Mind must be clear for the Sunlight we thirst.

 

Number Two is Beauty & Truth VENUS

She says think of others sometimes

Love arouses our Volcano passions

The fuel that inspires our lives.

 

Number Three is our home Mother EARTH

She gives us Water the source of all life

With Mind & Heart now we can create magic

Fully equipped to handle all strife.

 

Fourth in line is Fiery Action MARS

We’ve miles to walk and Mountains to climb

We set goals and do what is necessary

Right selfless action works every time.

 

Fifth in line is the Expansive JUPITER

We are now shown to share our rewards

We earn our real Stripes when we are global

Like Luke 12*, hands open, don’t hoard.

 

Now we come to our 3 Judgments

Questions asked to assess our Life’s run

The outer 3 planets hold Soul mirrors

Have we evolved and become our own SUN

            (Saturn-Uranus-Neptune)

 

Have you been responsible?  SATURN asks Sixth

You get your first Ring when you are matured

Life is for happiness just not yours alone

High School graduate when humility you’ve shown.

 

Have you been a leader?  URANUS asks Seventh

You get your last Ring when you’ve stretched all you can

Stayed your own guide through trials & pathways

College graduate so full, like me you lay sideways!

 

Have you unveiled the Spirit?  NEPTUNE asks Eighth

And did all you could to pass these 3 tests?

Are you now the perfect 9 & embrace Life outer and inner?

Then the Winds carry Saints & then return sinners.**

 

 *  The King James Bible  - Luke 12: 13-21  Only parable taught by God and not Jesus.

**  Sin is when we do not become sUnners by honoring U and then return to transcend the little ego i of the sinner. 

Inspired by Chaldean Numerology and the 2010 Scholastic Science book on Planets by Justin McCory Martin  

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after vision says:

my poet, you just filled empty slots for sub - teachers around the world

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jcf108 says:

Thank you for the encouragement! My background is science and math yet always loved poetry - my way of fusing the two! :)
 

Blakmista says:

Thanks so much great writing. We too marvel at cohesiveness. Inspiring!

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