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WarriorCarryingWater
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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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Arguments - nobody wins

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Arguments, no one wins,
Feelings brused,
Words thrown like rocks,
Pelt her, tears fall,
Walk away and pray,
In the dog house again,
Past problems unearthed,
But we keep digging,
She's so stubborn, I'm always at fault,
Its never the major things,
Just the smallest of straws that tip the scale,
We could make bricks with all our mud,
To rebuild our foundation,
But we can't get past our pride,
To work together,
So we point out flaws, and wonder what if...
We could start over, 
If we had more money, 
We just keep quiet and do nothing instead,
Guilty of being honest at the wrong time,
Love is pain, routine, fantastic, boring, healing, and toxic in one word,
A war of words where someone has to win and the other must lose,
I don't want to win and lose you.

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after vision says:

my poet, words cut like a knife - sometimes cutting strings

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

After vision, I appreciate your feedback and your talent and poems!
 

douknowmagic says:

This was my last relationship, wishing you can take back things said in an argument. Great write thank you for sharing. -magic

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thanks douknowmagic!
 

jlmoore2 says:

Words can be weapons - once released, the destruction is there - forever. You can only do better next time and learn from the past.

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lovelylady1 says:

ummmm... My king, is "This" the men club only? No matter, the tongue is a two edge sword and we women stay packing... not fair to the one's we love. Thank you for sharing
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

@ Not at all, real talk with the dueling skills, thanks!

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