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Trying To Hold On:

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There's so much in my head,
I'm trying hard to not let it go,
siting at the edge ready to blow.
Sadness, fills the open spots in my heart,
open your eyes and really see, I don't
have enough in me to keep playing the part.
Broken down, shuffled around,  kicked around,
I'm finally down.
My body is being pushed underwater, all hopes are to drown,
but something holds me up and say not now.
I want to reach for the stars, leave this earth,
but god is not letting me.
Some days I hang on by a thread,
forcing myself to get through the day instead.
Forced to hide my true self, I'm struggling to hold on,
I don't know how much longer I can hold on,
life seems like the same old damn song,
In my quite time I often wonder if this is were I belong.

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

WOW!!!! This deep right here.I can so relate to the feeling...Keep the faith, being that, that's all holding on is.

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2b2b2 says:

Poignant Capture.....this tugs at the heart and soul....Write On....all is but a ride on a Universal Cycle...Peace Be With You....ONE

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hymnagen says:

When holding yields this kind of fruit, it's worth it. #Respect
 

after vision says:

my poet, hang on to the pen and write to the day light. loved this truth

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