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If You Should Doubt MY Love

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If you should ever doubt my love; hear
me when I say "Baby, oh how my love is true."
Look deep into my eyes as they reveal the
hidden desire that burned like fire awaiting
the day I'd meet you.
Allow me to kiss you where I please...
The gentle touch of my lips will put your
mind at ease.
Lock your fingers between mine you'll feel my
passion flow so divine. 
Rest your head upon my breast and listen as my
heart sings a God given melody of my love for you.
Hear the rhythmic sounds of love beating just how deeply I love you.

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social seer says:

Passion Flower, don't cry but I feel you can do better with those overused words. Hope no offense. Do you need a silk hanky?
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Lovelylady1 says:

Lol.... Nope! But thank you my king for your honesty. It was my flow at the time. I think if I had someone in mind the words would have been more intense. Just trying to get in touch with my softer side...no, huh?
 

social seer says:

Yeah, that's a good way to describe your writing on this one. I look forward to your next post and am already waiting with 12 red beauties in a gold box to hand you.
 

after vision says:

my poet the raw emotions of love has been captured here

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