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love riddle

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romance

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These 5 senses
Seem so senseless 
All together one alive mess
I think they don't make the witness
No need to think of me any less
Lover when you play that bass
I feel it creeping up my base
God damn I feel am in a haze
Man I ask is this all just a chase
Please tell me if you do know the case
Cause baby all of it look like a phase
Some fading mistake
Are we needed to make
Or are we here to be; just for the sake
It all stays we can't take
That kiss was a long word oh how it made me shake

 

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LP45 says:

Nice write. Great flow too.
 

after vision says:

Great flow and nice understanding of lifes riddle for love

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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