tjaigreen
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CATEGORY
life
I can't concentrate long enough to escape
My consciousness makes it hard enough to hate
Crossroads of crossed paths
Crossed loves with lost laughs
Get off the gas, you driving too fast
This sh*t can't go on and it can't last
Step forward but leave the past in the past
Or let go and leave our paths as passed
Aquaintances to acquainted friends
Soul ties twisted at the end
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COMMENTS
love_supreme says: "Step forward but leave the past in the past" and the line right after it is fire. Excellent write. |
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LP45 says: Deep! Sometimes I feel I can read about different instances of situations that I've been through in my lifetime past and present. I guess you can call it art imitating life. Thank you tjaigreen, I appreciate the share. |
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RonnieL says: Boom! Word play and flow...Standing O! |
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tjaigreen says: Thank you all for your feedback. |
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