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lightness in the dark

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Griot Drippings...

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May melodies of success

never cease;

may ebony elevations

never devolve to the least—

ivory delusions…

 

We deserve the best;

our ancestors

built the thriving west.

Why should

our children have less?

 

No vanity, no jealousy;

come spend time with me:

we still family!

 

Tarzan was a deceiving joke;

Tonto means “silly”.

Every egg comes with yoke.

Those movies; what a pity!?

 

Stop the invoked suicide;

fratricide

taking lives of yours and mine.

Lets live divine;

and every little thing will be fine.

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social seer says:

Excellent poem. But the last two stanzas seem a bit superfluous.
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mlowe5 says:

social seer, thanks for the read and honest feedback. much appreciated. Will reflect upon the feedback. Again, thanks.

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