Ryan's Loves and Precious LTL

I have written two books about love the deep love between an urban socal brotha and his love for an Ethiopian woman named Selamawit. His children from a Botswana beauty named Taminiyae. There is Amharic, Setswana, Arabic and Tennessee slang in books. I would love if anyone could have the time to read and give me their opinion. They are on Amazon in paperback and ebook. I could also send to anyone's email. Thank you.