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A Rock in a Hard Place

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Facing a slate that I have used to write my account

Smooth to touch but etched in chips of story I can’t deny

As pieces of my life forgotten is caught in glimpses 3rd eye

Reminding me of the mark I once made back before this day

Forced to turn another way for relief from authored dismay

Scrolls unfurled tell-tale in arrivals at this most tight space…..

Unable to erase or change such precarious quarters procured

I’m solidly inbetween crashing walls rotating in misdirection

Forces of rapture stressing points of reference centered in self

As these closing principalities encroach on basis of fault lines

Involved in this climb into descent purposefully wedged in place

Sedentary existence betrays me as I have lost sight of freedom

Only in surveying such depressing surrounds can I begin to ascend

As suspense can not be reasoned for weight in remains of pressure

Still is in the time of reading over life scriptures meant for light

Wields of slumber come to an end as I awaken in sound state

Starting a new chapter of mountain climbing, known as ……

A Rock In A Hard Place!

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Phenomenal Paris says:

Man, man, man. I love this.

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mrmelody7 says:

Really enjoyed this, keep the focus that's all to it, the beautiful struggle hard but fair, do it to you satisfied
 

scash102 says:

Incredible metaphors and description, "solidly between crashing walls rotating in misdirection." I like this line
 

catmartan says:

Splendid 2b ! Enjoyed it !

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Wize Dom says:

Man I read this piece from top to bottom then from bottom to top and it went just as hard, you hold a golden pen my brother.
 

2b2b2 says:

Thanks alot Phenomenal Paris....ONE
 

2b2b2 says:

So true mrmelody7, no doubt....thank you!
 

2b2b2 says:

(winks) scash102.....thanks for checking me!
 

2b2b2 says:

Thank you kindly catmartan.....ONE
 

2b2b2 says:

Thanks Wize...Namaste

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