Hanging On
covered with a can liner
standing in the rain
awaiting the train
headed for a soup kitchen meal
yet,a smiling face
the struggle is still real
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Gotcha yeah its real, keep that smile
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Very powerful...I'm sharing this poem, I hope you don't mind. This is one that should be shared. Keep that pen movin BigWill!!
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There's nothing more powerful and liberating then ones truth, I agree all should read.
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I have been there Big Will, my brotha i have been there, this one has touched my heart in more ways then one. Thank you for sharing.
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