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Sacrificing My Innocence in Anger

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I gave her five-alive

and inside a part of me died –

slain by the emotional pain

that was so evident in her eyes.

 

Tears said she did not deserve this.

They were absolutely right.

Now I have forever been cursed with

the memory of my offense that night.

 

That innocence can never be restored,

my violation can never be undone.

So before taking action, son, be sure.

It may be better that your actions are none.

 

That innocence can never be restored,

my violation can never be undone.

So before taking action, son, be sure.

It may be better that your actions are none.

Visuals @ http://headroominations.blogspot.com/2014/07/sacrificing-my-inocence-in-anger.html

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Devonte7638 says:

Deep. Sounds like the guilt eats you up inside.

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hymnagen says:

Thanks for your comment. Much time has passed,but the memory doesn't fade. Peace
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tjaigreen says:

Nice.

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mind_molest says:

Nice ink!

 

mind_molest says:

Nice ink!

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hymnagen says:

tjaigreen

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msmaja187 says:

What's cant be undone but u can do better and it seems you've learned your lesson. Beautiful peace.

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hymnagen says:

Thanks for the encouraging words msmaja187.

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lai-d.jay says:

I feel this on so many levels it's crazy

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DallasCowgirl says:

Wow.... Always a blessing reading your pieces. I feel this!

 

jrob_TheWiseson says:

WOW!!!! This is so deep!

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