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life 1 min read 871 views Aug 2, 2014

Sacrificing My Innocence in Anger

I gave her five-alive

and inside a part of me died –

slain by the emotional pain

that was so evident in her eyes.

 

Tears said she did not deserve this.

They were absolutely right.

Now I have forever been cursed with

the memory of my offense that night.

 

That innocence can never be restored,

my violation can never be undone.

So before taking action, son, be sure.

It may be better that your actions are none.

 

That innocence can never be restored,

my violation can never be undone.

So before taking action, son, be sure.

It may be better that your actions are none.

Visuals @ http://headroominations.blogspot.com/2014/07/sacrificing-my-inocence-in-anger.html

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Devonte7638

Deep. Sounds like the guilt eats you up inside.

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hymnagen

Thanks for your comment. Much time has passed,but the memory doesn't fade. Peace

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tjaigreen

Nice.

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mind_molest

Nice ink!

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mind_molest

Nice ink!

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hymnagen

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msmaja187

What's cant be undone but u can do better and it seems you've learned your lesson. Beautiful peace.

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hymnagen

Thanks for the encouraging words msmaja187.

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lai-d.jay

I feel this on so many levels it's crazy

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DallasCowgirl

Wow.... Always a blessing reading your pieces. I feel this!

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jrob_TheWiseson

WOW!!!! This is so deep!

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