Hear Me Out : Whispers of A Gift
"I don't know why it hurts so much cause I've been here before.....every feeling, every word..."
In many words she is...suffering, wondering in loves realm of meaning, contemplating in chances of deception.Searching for affection she day-dreams of her special one"if there is after that one and a few, who knew little to non on how to treat a lady"...she was gone with the wind, the lost one...she set herself free...debating with the mirror, she knows she deserves better...as she whispers in the steamy tub, caressing her emotions by lathering sweet scents on her gracious body, her tears disappear in the bubbles, rising to the top, funny scenes as she closes her eyes as it pops, sweet laughter...So she decides, her heart is worth it, searching but it really is worth it, suffering but it is...worth it... ...in the end---"I guess you never held on to quality or you would've recognised by now....something so special, so true when it's standing right in front of you....."...A proud lady who knows what she wants, appreciates the affectionate and gives back, she loves and as for thee above, it is below her, as she is destined for more, she is a gift of this earth. A gift from the almighty, she is happiness to those worthy.. She is a gift
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Very smooth nice rhythm to this
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Love it when words make thoughts this visual. This is hot, Sun. Peace
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Never a disappointment reading your work.. Love this poem. I hope you don't mind me sharing it. It's nice to be reading your work again, haven't seen you on here in awhile. As always Keep that pen movin Number3 :)
Read tretre's poemsNumber3
thank you as always poets. Word Up
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I love this.... its a very unpredictable poem, you cant tell how its going to end or what coming next. Nice flow...
Read paper_feelings's poemsDebbieownsthis
Beautiful
Read Debbieownsthis's poemsNumber3
thank you paper feeling ans debbie, means a lot, Word Up
Read Number3's poemsLP45

Beautifully written number3. Thank you for sharing.
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