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first love 1 min read 649 views Aug 9, 2014

The Unperfect Girl

I use to think of you way out reach especially for girls that were just like me.

All to nice and alittle more sweet ,you can drop the spice and plus I wasnt  half as near as neat and had no swag.

And I felt lower ,Its one of the reasons I sat all the way in the back of the class.

And I was quiet ,and a big girl that could use a diet.

So I would lose myself in this world ,the world where I was your perfect sized girl.

And we be the perfect couple having fun ,it came to a point where I would go as far as having your first and only son.

And we be married and have a nice house on a beach ,but then the teacher walk me from my sleep.

So I would snap back to the real world ,the world where  I  wasnt your perfect girl.

 

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DallasCowgirl

Profound!!!

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igotastory

Thank you underhiswings7. i really enjoy the feed back.

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love_supreme

Very nice

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