“No one is free even the birds are chained to the sky Searching and Soaring praying for hope ”

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life 1 min read 420 views Aug 14, 2014

In Too Deep

Believing the lies Falling for the deceit Knowing what your doing is wrong But listening to the false truths Beginning to hate myself to core filling myself to the maximum capacity of more hatred, pain, and evil realizing that I'm in too deep and I'll drown if I don't grab the rope knowing that there will always be HOPE and I'm willing to dust myself and try again leaving the BS behind taking a new route to prosper in life and overcome deceit

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Phenomenal Paris

This touch home.. I love it

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