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life 1 min read 694 views Aug 23, 2014

odd scribbles

Dimmed lights, laid back under the covers, A4 on my bedside table, searching for my black pen...

From long walks to trailing thoughts...its been a long day.

My,

well being in distress.

Feeling like a mess.

Throbbing pain in my chest.

...Let me to rest.

Let me breath a little.

Ease down my lucid scribbling.

Voices in my head ranting.

Tag teaming with misery they scream.

Let me rest a little,

I'm tired of searching for silver linings.

Greeted constantly by short comings.

Seems the margin is.

Closer than it seems.

Let's call it a night and give thought to what tomorrow brings.

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hymnagen

I think every writer can relate to this. thanks for putting it down in words

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Number3

thank you Hymnagen, Word Up

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tretre

Ohhhh....So love this poem...Your a brilliant poet Number3 I'm going to share this one I hope you don't mind. Always keep that pen movin Number 3!!!!!!

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2b2b2

Great Share.....ONE

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Number3

thank you always tretre, Word Up 2b2b2

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Intheshadowz

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Number3

Thank you intheshadows ..Word UP

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Intheshadowz

No thankz needed , u deserve the love

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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