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romance 2 min read 615 views Sep 11, 2014

Love Abandoned me

LOVE DON'T LIVE HERE NOMORE. he left along time ago but deseption and anger rented a room i think there planning on staying.. they have no understanding on how heavy they got my mind weighing. I invited love back but it wasnt the same im so scared of diseption i knew for sure love had changed.. or was it me? know im mad... anger had a baby and named him angry... he pains me cause im always seeing red. i could maybe love love if anger was dead. Love dont live here nomore... he left i didnt evict.. i wish i did but i couldnt deal with the split... deseption always asking for sugar he always tell me sweet nothings and never delivers.. he drives me to drink poor liver. i remeber when love would make my soul quiver.. i keep looking for love but he no whwere to be found maybe he got what he wanted out of town... fuuck love cause he never loved me back..see that.. thats anger he always ready to attack. i dont know why i let them rent space in my mind maybe because they help pass the time. but yeah... love dont live here nomore. not at this time.

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hymnagen

This is the 3rd piece of yours that really clicked with me. I dig your vibe

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DallasCowgirl

Very well written. The realness and passion in your writings are what brings them to a great closure. Thanks for sharing.

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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