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life 1 min read 674 views Sep 19, 2014

Could this be

Sing me a love song

Write me a letter

Tell me why you can't live without me

See I have been with the guys

Who never reached out for me

Never tried to grasp my inner beauty

Just satisfied with my outer shell

To look me in my eye would have been to much not many can handle the free spirit that runs through me pouring over like Angels falls

But yet they all want to be under my waterfall

To stand on the edge to feel the never ending stream of my love that they think themselves so deserving of

I want this but how many time does a girl have to hurt before the right one comes along

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tretre

Beautiful poem! Keep that pen movin TwistedInk!!!

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Devonte7638

Love the poem. Im sure you'll find the right one

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love_supreme

Excellent poem. Good write.

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Iconbryant

Sometimes it sounds like we all are searching for the same person lol. Great Poem!!!!

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TwistedInk

Thank you everyone I enjoy reading your comments makes me feel special... But it's seems like everyone is so shallow iconbryant but I finally found a puddle as deep as me it's hard work lol

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Jay Beach

Love this poem as well. You speaking on something that's very true about society. It's sad but it's true. Nevertheless, it's a very dope poem. Thanks for letting us see some of that inner beauty.

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hymnagen

Very nice piece. Thanks for sharing it.

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TwistedInk

Thank you all very much you all encourage me to never stop writing I got told by another poet who has been to school for poetry that poem are not just how I feel but you have to study it I haven't been to school for this so she disqualified me as a Artist lol the hate was real

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Devonte7638

That's like saying a singer can't sing just because they never took a singing class lol. A gift is a gift. Some are born talented other achieve theirs through hard work

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TwistedInk

Right good example I should have told her butt that

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amin901

nice poem

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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