Could this be
Sing me a love song
Write me a letter Tell me why you can't live without meSee I have been with the guys Who never reached out for me Never tried to grasp my inner beauty Just satisfied with my outer shell To look me in my eye would have been to much not many can handle the free spirit that runs through me pouring over like Angels fallsBut yet they all want to be under my waterfall To stand on the edge to feel the never ending stream of my love that they think themselves so deserving of I want this but how many time does a girl have to hurt before the right one comes along
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Beautiful poem! Keep that pen movin TwistedInk!!!
Read tretre's poemsDevonte7638
Love the poem. Im sure you'll find the right one
Read Devonte7638's poemslove_supreme
Excellent poem. Good write.
Read love_supreme's poemsIconbryant
Sometimes it sounds like we all are searching for the same person lol. Great Poem!!!!
Read Iconbryant's poemsTwistedInk
Thank you everyone I enjoy reading your comments makes me feel special... But it's seems like everyone is so shallow iconbryant but I finally found a puddle as deep as me it's hard work lol
Read TwistedInk 's poemsJay Beach
Love this poem as well. You speaking on something that's very true about society. It's sad but it's true. Nevertheless, it's a very dope poem. Thanks for letting us see some of that inner beauty.
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Very nice piece. Thanks for sharing it.
Read hymnagen's poemsTwistedInk
Thank you all very much you all encourage me to never stop writing I got told by another poet who has been to school for poetry that poem are not just how I feel but you have to study it I haven't been to school for this so she disqualified me as a Artist lol the hate was real
Read TwistedInk 's poemsDevonte7638
That's like saying a singer can't sing just because they never took a singing class lol. A gift is a gift. Some are born talented other achieve theirs through hard work
Read Devonte7638's poemsTwistedInk
Right good example I should have told her butt that
Read TwistedInk's poemsamin901
nice poem
Read amin901's poemslove_supreme
Excellent write
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