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life 1 min read 893 views Oct 18, 2014

Erased From This Earth

Death Angel really busy

in my community

So many visits to the family

and real friends who

are true

As a mere mortal accept it

nothin else I can do

Find it quite ironic to lose

two special friends 800 miles apart

the acceptence broke my heart

left a void

The irony is they both   passed

on Oct 3rd

Death Angel like a eraser on

on a penciled pad

erasing my friends makin my soul

really quite sad

Am thankful though the Death Angel

take my friend body away

my beautiful memory of them

will always stay

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2b2b2

Great Work....Sobering topic...thanks for sharing!

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mrmelody7

Thanks 2b to be sure

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tretre

WOW!!! MrMelody!!! I really like this poem, it speaks for everyone who can relate, including myself. Beautiful write MrMelody. Always keep that pen movin!!!

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mrmelody7

Thank you Mz tretre wonderful friends are not replaceable nor other loved ones

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love_supreme

I like this poem.

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mrmelody7

Thank u love supreme

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