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life 1 min read 554 views Oct 31, 2014

Ode to the Monsters and People

Ahhhh

It doesn’t effect me anymore

Ahhhhh

You can’t take it away

My heart is drowned in it

I despise you

I can’t stand you

You betrayed me

Now I hate you

You did this to me

You broke me

But it’s okay

Because I only feel pain and hatred

No happiness

No love

But I find a weird comfort

In the demon inside of me

You left me alone but they came to my rescue

You treated me bad They treated me good

There is a big difference between You and They

You is the people in my life

They is the monsters in my head

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