“Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way”

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life 1 min read 930 views Nov 5, 2014

Gray Skies

I do not listen.

 

She does not hear.

 

Raising decibels fails to make either more clear,

so we each slow our speech

like the other is perceived

to be aboard short, yellow transit.

Still, we fail to understand sh!t

the other has to say, but we care,

ultimately enough to persevere

and THAT eventually turns

our gray skies clear.

 

-HymnAgen

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2b2b2

Nice Capture....familiar with this scenario myself.....ONE

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mrmelody7

Yep sometimes its as if male and females are speaking foreign language to each other, go figure

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The Immortal Wize

WOW!!!

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hymnagen

I'm always appreciative of my peer's remarks. Thanks!

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recklessmonet

Ha, I know the feeling. You captured it so well. Thanks for the share.

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hymnagen

recklessmonet, thanks for the read. Welcome to the Vibe!

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