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Phenomenal Paris
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first love

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My heart is empty, a void in my soul. A missing piece, where a part of you belong. A part of me, a part of you, I want to hold. Wanting to see the masterpiece of this love. Longing to see WE in him or her. Wanting to share this love legacy. Feeling incomplete.. Hurting to know the feeling a mother gets seeing her child for the first time. Not caring if this relationship survives. Not caring if I ever take on your last name. Not caring if you stay. Just want this one thing.. The cure to this aching pain. Don't I deserve that much? 

 

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love_supreme says:

I can feel the longing in this poem. It connects directly to me. Excellent write.

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2b2b2 says:

Powerful Capture.....ONE

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hymnagen says:

Wow. To be wanted like that should humble a true man's spirit. Great piece.

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DallasCowgirl says:

Stumped. You're speaking a lot of minds in this piece.

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