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life 1 min read 598 views Dec 13, 2014

Thin line

Thin line between the two

love and hate

unconditional tranfers 

into conditional

when the heart is at stake

heightened with euphoria

and emotional rush

volcanic eruptions

by the hand

of one touch

here comes the turn

along with a twist

images of death

is felt with each kiss

now, that line 

becomes so imaginary

that fairy tale love

is now ordinary

there is no chance to rebuild

the foundation is all lies

we're on opposite sides

there should be no surprise

love is a struggle

war is the game

in between the two sides

thin line remains the same.

 

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tretre

I like this poem. Not only does it explain the complications between love and hate, it's the truth. Beautiful work. Keep that pen movin CatMartan!

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catmartan

Thanks tretre !

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