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life 1 min read 516 views Dec 16, 2014

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Lost in a zone, don't know where to be , what to see , feel or think ,,

waiting for that touch ,, that touch of Love , waiting for this zone to

turn into lust ,, a lust that quaver my body into a boost , as if your

driving my NASCAR , full speed with your hard metal to the paddle ,,

the fire blazes form the intense motion of our body,,,, Rhythm of the beating drums in a safari......

sweat race off our body trying to catch a cool breeze ... but wait is it really a cool breeze,,,, or is it dat my body is in another zone

, A zone that only one can dream of such a touch ,, a touch that will deliver me from all the pain an anguish that one has put  upon me ,,,

nope am just Lost in this unfulfilling zone ...

Ladiva.....

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2b2b2

Nice Write.....ONE

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Ladiva

Thanks, new to the poetry world,,,

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hymnagen

Welcome! Keep doing your thing,siSTAR

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Ladiva

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