“AWAKENING MINDS”

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just different 3 min read 551 views Dec 17, 2014

Prosaic Pundit

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YOU said I was underneath 
And even beneath you
Although cut & severed
I never believed you
Apparently the tragedy
Is that my own mind
Had conceived you
Subconsciously de-ceit-ful
An unbelievable fool
Used as an instrumental tool
To make me SUB§ervient
So highly perceivable
Your lies are irretrievable
No longer concealable

I know NOW
That I'm cosmically regal
More than a subversive person
As they, the depraved crave
Seek to have we enslaved
Coercing persons to bathe 
In the fluoridated waters
Of this American Eagle
It's mission is see through

The behind the scene
Magnates that mandate
And demand rates
For decisions for derision
Have caused contemptuous division
Amongst the sleeping people

I cry 
At the segregation of race
Through geographically graphic syllabics
And actual cosmic space
Time wasted 
Such a disgrace
Putrid & pungent in abundance
Disastrously astronomical taste

Of the american pie
I mean the american lie
It's 'there again', why?!
There's no equality
Proven through 
Many persons life quality
No need for quantity
Their cacophonies 
Are disturbingly 
Heard quite audibly

My many experiences HERE 
Were more than outer bodily
For my hobby 
Is to 'chicken scratch wobbily'
Writing some well defined prose 
When I compose sonnets
Soliloquies and homilies

Honestly
I hear cacophonies constantly
It's now commonplace commonly
'No god' to respond to me
Maybe, just possibly
God is an alien oddity
That abandoned us consciously
No correspondence see?!
He, she or It left quite abscondedly
Or maybe god is merely an endearing
Sincere philosophy
Or a silent anomaly of sovereignty
Maybe its consciousness
Is a defiant self-reliant titans obsequy?
Maybe it died 
On its genetic engineering odyssey
In its exploding star 
Or omnibus rocketry
'Private time' prodigy
Humans are possibly
Maybe even logically its progeny
But this Monad
Of both good & bad, its so sad
Offered no apology
For the creation of pain & despondency

So I've learned
To prophetically discern
And churn this burn
Was once too concerned for worms
But life's a journey I sojourn
Until courts adjourned
So I detach myself and disconnect
To protect a projected 
Perfect prosaic prosody
Star dust particle reciprocity 
Of an analogous atrocity

We are tangibly 
A sickened thickened layer of astronomy
Merged with biology 
And self-aware sentient psychology
But humans are fuming 
And choose to be feuding
While exhuming hues wantonly
Obviously exuded demonstrably

Historical chronology 
Exposing opposed monsters of monstrosity
Concocted and vomited monstrously
Comparably to daily dishonesty
Leading to the death of breath & flesh
That leads to a priestly 
Threnody and doxology
This world has 'screwed my mind blind'
So I digress, and impressively guess 
That you can call it intellectual sodomy

~SkTzO~

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tretre

I like this poem. It had me thinking which I like. Powerful write. I hope you don't mind me sharing this one. Keep that pen movin Sktzo!!!!

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hymnagen

"The behind the scene Magnates that mandate And demand rates For decisions for derision Have caused contemptuous division Amongst the sleeping people" THIS captures what I have been feeling of late. Well done

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