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life 1 min read 531 views Jan 18, 2015

Intoxication

Tonight we get drunk in each other and we will like it

You'll sip me slow and I'll hit the back of your throat as you continue to drink and I dare you to fight it

You've never had a drink like me before

The class of champagne, the strength of gin, with the wisdom of 40 year old whiskey in each cup you pour

Take another sip as I take you on an intoxicating rollercoaster

My taste will burst in your jaws the way the bullet does the gun after its came out of the shoulder holster

Don't drink too fast baby the night is still young

But with every sip, whish me around your tongue and gums

Sip slower cause you going to fast

Because I promise when your on your last drop and the drinks stop, you'll wish you savored your last.

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love_supreme

This is a different twist on wisdom. Excellent write.

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2b2b2

Ha ha....Tight Work.....ONE

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love_supreme

I like this poem.

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