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life 1 min read 747 views Feb 6, 2015

Amy Winehouse

I'm nothing to you

but an alternative

You feed off of my weakness

which in this case is

YOU

I keep thinking 

that one day

I will finally say

No

Stop

Don't

But it always comes out

No

Don't stop

Living a wreckless life

and when it all falls down

You will

Walk away

Even when there is a 

price to pay

I still let you back

My crack

it's just

It is just

that I want you

to love me

The way I 

love you

It's sad

Because I know that you never will

That would be too much 

like doing the right thing

Mookie

So

I'm checking myself into rehab

 

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mrmelody7

Sorry the way Amy died I liked her music had one of her CDs shame she said no no to rehab good write and use of metaphors

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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