“Just because my journey is different, doesn't mean I'm lost.”
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If I were anything else IDE
BE AMAZED
Nothing here is in perfect frame
MY heart should locate a vein
Where I can feel again
Then IDE
BE AMAZED
Things dont travel to far from my conscience
And its constant
Disbelief that this would ever be me
Being, "AMAZED!"
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This one is a mind-bender but I somehow I get it. Excellent write.
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thanks. latin_lover...I appreciate the comment and yes. My my mind was even bent writing it...lol Its coming from a fustrated state in a relationship where I feel like its no hurt I havent felt and no pain a man hasnt given me, He thinks I get upset when He trys to belittle me but Im not amazed. Its only the same feeling Ive felt and now ive built a barrier, I can feel nothing. Its fustrating because no matter how bad it hurts sometimes I just want to feel. I want to BE AMAZED.
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