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life 1 min read 842 views Feb 15, 2015

Talking Back

For those who have never

had Back trouble

please do count your

blessings double

A chore just to get up

You like a string puppet

walk the best way you can

no help grabbing a cane

You get to feelin

some what better

you make a sudden move

once again Back out the groove

The Back whispers not quite

all there yet

Like the absent minded professor

again I forget

Grab hold of the reign

to pull myself up into

the truck

with buzzards luck

bingo Back out again

No whisper this time

Back tells me oh you

one of them hard head fellas

not listeninng what I tell ya

Got my attention

Damn sure aint talkin

back to the Back

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Charles2

back to back, talk. makes you grateful you can still walk. never want to think about lying in pain, till you are turned ...and set it off. nursing attendants think you are deranged for the language which you speak can only be felt and not explained.

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Charles2

thank you for taking the time to check out my mental exercise sessions. trying to improve the way i express ideas to make them more fluid and effortless to read.

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mrmelody7

U never realized how much stuff the back control till it hits you.

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mrmelody7

Well that's a noble cause think that is what most want when they write. Writing down the list of things I like to do but I enjoy it during the cold months when I cant go like I want

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Brownchildt

That’s hot.. Its funny, it flows.. What I like most, its true.. Thank you for sharing

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mrmelody7

Thank you much Docs say its arthur showed me the xrays dont do much lifting now one thing bout Back Back dont play

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