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romance 1 min read 484 views Feb 16, 2015

I Can't

I can't make it without you

I can't make it on my own

I can't do this by myself

I can't do this alone

Accept all the responsibility

Take all the blame

Carry all the baggage

Harbor all the pain

Hurt all the time

Cry all the tears

Weather all the storms

Confront all the fears

Ask all the questions

Have all the answers

Solve all the problems

Deal with all the pressures

I just can't

 

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xclusive

If only we could. Nice write

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Suphomeboi

Thx much love

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DallasCowgirl

I usually don't feel "end rhyme" poems, but this one is an exception. You broke that down like a sermon, bruh.

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love_supreme

Very nice

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