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romance 2 min read 571 views Feb 19, 2015

Secret Admirer

Had that look of a note.

A note passed from his soul to mine.

At the end your secret admirer.

At the tip the blood of a heart shaped stain.

It stained the paper so deep.

My fingerprints bled upon it.

My eyes looked up in a far off distance.

So far off in set of what I think to be his feelings.

He looked at me, twitching his spirit at me.

I looked back.

His eyes demanding attension from my fearful heart.

I had no choice but to give in. To go inside his abyss.

More and more I began to feel his love, that agressive torch of a sexual touch.

The whispers were hitting my stomach as the notes became more lavish.

I had no choice but to vomit the pleasurable abuse from him.

The collide of love and anger blended into a scene thats choking me out.

I came up with a plan.

I met up with him.

And him with me.

He stared at me as though his eyes were bombing my caved feelings.

I went deep into staring at him back.

He started to persuade my heart into pumping my feelings to the point were it hurts.

And I had no choice but to bleed out.

And let him drink of me.

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EmpressRee

loved the story line. If this was my piece I would have called it Soul Connection :)

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2b2b2

Tight piece....well crafted...ONE

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The Immortal Wize

Like swimming you made this look easy but all the depth of emotion packed in that one moment when you penned this down is the deep side of the pool.

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