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first love 1 min read 748 views Feb 21, 2015

All I want is you in 8 syllables

Hear me ramble on about you. And me. . . Of how perfect we would seem. As close as two seems. . .and this is why. I day dream about you in my. Dreams, my arms. . . in my future you... Are mind and I yours, We in this. So believe me when I say this. I'm past the stages thinking this. Would just pass by like a cool breeze. As ease...I'd get on my knees. You. Being my eve. In the garden of Love I'd be... Hand in hand with you. And no forbidden fruits...so we. No secrets just bare honesty. Trust me. Loyalty is you. And I am crazy about you girl. So listen to me when I say. . .

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Love...this

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