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Poetic08'
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lightness in the dark
It good see a few of old poet still producing beautiful work, keep it Kings

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Trap by love

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As you fill this passion hidden within me , am open to receive all your desire to be love .....beyond the depths of normal love ,has never...... have i been so swept away like a ship in a storm with no direction;

 

Trape by love ,as you have catcher me both mentally and phyiscally , am forever appreciative of a love that only one with the true soul of a queen can give;

 

Trape by love ; if the cost to be free and not know love at all .....i rather be trape by love on an island with only your passion to rain down on me ;

 

Trap by love, as you become an inescapable force , leaving every part of me shook to the core of my existance, am forever reminded that i am trap by this thing call love .

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DallasCowgirl says:

I'm going to say this with all of the honesty that I can find... Your poetry pieces are cruel teases. It's like bringing cavier to a party and instead of placing it on the table for all of the guests to enjoy you go in the corner and snack on it by yourself. Or better yet like foreplay with no sex. You have very beautiful pieces that seem as if they resemble sporadic thoughts in your brain, but I'm constantly finding (and I believe that I can speak for others as well) that every time I come prepared for a full tasty meal, I end up leaving with an almost empty stomach. I love your poetry...But I need more... ;) Stop teasing people...Lol

 

Ghostwriter716 says:

Very nice I agree with under his wings7 she said EXACTLY what I was thinking

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