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romance 2 min read 534 views Mar 7, 2015

Ms.

Breaking down each line, as the pen lays upon the pad
Penciling in my name questioning, was I better than what she had
The answer will not be told, due to secrecy she swore
Upon her steps I sit and wait, hoping, with every knock on her door
If today is the day, she will hear my cries, to open even slightly parted
Between the lines, she does not have to read, I give myself whole hearted
The public notice, a notice, to rebuild her heart one piece at a time
Seconds to become first, last reversed, she is my muse as I mime
Time is spent but is she gone, all the things that seemed so true
Where did it all go wrong, Right pass nothing when I'm here without you 
For her here I stand, not above humbling myself, to go down on my knee
Stuck under her influence, Ms. Honey, you are where I want to be
Succulent is the taste of your lips, in theory pressed upon mine
Imaginary thoughts, causing my body to relax, and my feelings to unwind
Delivery for Ms. Hearts and Flowers, every hour, what minute am I on 
No return address, I must be correct, here is where I belong
If not today, surely tomorrow, Ms. Stay Away will come back home
From house to house, found this heart, take my seat to never roam
Ms. Why Should I, can I teach something different about the games you played
Yesterday, I watched him break your heart, checking all the moves that he made
A pawn to him, Ms. Queen To Be, speak no ill if you will, choose another man
Checkmate, no pharaoh now, senseless to believe he can love you like I can 
Three plays before fore, I already imagined, lying with you in sex
Excuse me Ms., spoken mentally, lessons learned about respect
Experience my teacher, Ms. Misty Blue, my hello will you hear 
Hi to Hey until the end time, Hurry Ms., before my love disappear.

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DallasCowgirl

Oh my! *snap snap* I really really enjoyed this! Very artistic and each line was perfectly calculated. Yes! :)

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PHIRE

Awww thanks I enjoyed seeing the positive feedback. If you get a chance read "Mr." By curlzandcreativity. This piece was inspired after I real hers.

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The Immortal Wize

this is Quite the gem.

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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