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life 1 min read 462 views Mar 19, 2015

Summer Breeze!

Summer breeze I love how you make the leaves on the trees move the branches shake.The air that blows through my window as I sit in the car at the park feeling real mellow summer breeze you put my mind at ease . at times I don't have to put my ac on freeze cause that warm summer breeze just makes my heart feel pleased looking at the sky smiling watching the birds glide and be free when I'm going through bad situations I always can park and chill and ease down the window with my favorite tune banging out the window seat back watching the pretty women pass by staring through my window. enjoying the scene feeling excited cause this moment is just so rite wishing that darkness will never fall tonite summer breeze you just make me feel so fine I couldn't ask for a better day or moment cause rite now I'm just feeling blessed to be able to live this moment so now I must sit back and wonder will I ever get to live these moments in the next 5 years!!.

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ms.poeticpassion

Nice Write.. I love how you painted picture with your words

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love_supreme

Very nice

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