I Want
I want someone that is crazy about me. The thought of my body language in trouble, but he runs to see. Meetings he cancel to be by my side, the pride he puts away to cry. The Motivation he gives me, the empire we built, the bling on top on our ceiling that never drips.We always catch feelings for one another, he's always on my hips, never flips. Where is he?
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I digg! Nice write.. Write on
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Thank you.
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You're welcome
Read KingQadarDwon''s poemslove_supreme
Excellent write.
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Thank you
Read lyrics_Poetry's poemshymnagen
Crazy about you, but never flips? I'm not sure dude exists! LOL I dig the sentiment. You penned it nicely
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Tight Write.....ONE
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@hymnagen crazy about you meaning in love etc. Poetry comes in different formats. Every poem has a meaning between confusing lines. That's why you have to read it very carefully. Some get it, some don't, but a true poet would only know that.
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All my poems tells stories written between lines. Focus on putting the pieces and words together and it will reveal to you.
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I can always break it down if no one gets it.
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lyrics_Poetry it was just a joke. I actually love that this piece is so coherent while the opening and closing lines seemingly conflict! I thought you did that intentionally just to be clever poetically. My comment was intended to be a nod to you for flipping it like that. I may not have read all your works here, but those that I have, I've enjoyed. Keep doing what you do the way you do it. #Respect
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I really appreciate that. I love your work. You are a good poet.haven't read all, but i can relate to some. You keep writing as well.
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