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life 1 min read 544 views Mar 22, 2015

Twenty Four Below

Folding dirty laundry to compartmentalize unnecessary memories in non sequential order 

Chaos organized behind manila folder tabs in chest pains until heartache overloads from mass storage 

Evaporated tears become saliva to swallow when words don't adequately explain exactly what I mean

Nimble quivers plague the very essence of my crowded fears briefly shaking up things in my head 

Crushing the debris of destruction on construction paper hoping this euphoria will bring me closer to Ms. Stones Art Class 

Rearranging my living room, now love seats opposite foul cabinets behind statutes of limitations for dismantled trophy kills of battered dreams, reflections of self centered lazy boy surrounding the backdrop of mirrored mental mirages, twenty four below in this place

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deforeman

I love it

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odonko-ba

...twenty four below in this place...keep writing my Brother never put the pen down.

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2b2b2

Sharp as an ice-pick....well played....ONE

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Ak rio

Great choice of vocab

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G.Moore

Thank you all for reading my piece. I've been heavily training my mind and body this month so I haven't been as in tune with the site as usual. But as always I can't express enough how grateful I am that "vibers" take the time to read my work. Peace power and progress

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love_supreme

Very nice

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