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romance 1 min read 397 views Mar 27, 2015

It Deepens Still

The more I am away the more I feel we are far apart, butbut oh so close at heart, 

It Deepens Still.....

These feelings for you are so real I am scared, never had love shared, only love I shed, I know your fully aware hope you are fully prepared,this is something that's cherished, some will die for or kill,

It Deepens Still.....

There's nothing else I want or need from the world except your child a boy or a girl, this will make our family complete, with you by my side I cant be beat, when I think of living without you I get a deep unrelenting chill,

It Deepens Still.....

Why do you love me so, it's a wonder, your helping me grow and come from under, from where my heart was cold from the ice inside my soul we both have no control,

Our Love It Deepens Still.....

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ms.poeticpassion

Nice write

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hymnagen

Lovely sentiment nicely penned! Tight piece

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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love_supreme

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