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first love 1 min read 580 views Mar 30, 2015

Heartache

I remember the long stares from across the room, the way you would walk by just so you could talk to me. I still can feel your eyes have a conversation with me that I have yet to forget. That smile that engulfed me and drew me into your world. I was lost in you. The more we would exchange deep intellectual dialect, the more I fell for you. The day you took your eyes from mine, I was the last to know. Left drowning in your eyes, I was just trying to find an escape from the mere thought of you now. Struggling for air, I fight to survive. No longer the feeling of that new love I had, just a pain that I can't reach. 

 

 

 

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DallasCowgirl

Wow.... I can definitely comprehend and understand, sis. The feelings are really real....

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love_supreme

Wow, very nice.

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KingQadarDwon'

Great write!!!!

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Ak rio

Inspiring good poem

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DeeliteNMe

Thank you so much my beautiful people!!! This came from a deep place which was hard to find.

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