“Realizing LOVE stared me in the face. I finished the race, even though I finished last, he still crowned Me Queen 1st place.”

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life 1 min read 539 views Apr 1, 2015

Love Thing

I WANT A MAN WHO LOVES ME AND SHOW IT AND IS CONSISTEN...T WITH HIS LOVE..I FEEL ALONE IN A HOME WITH MAN I SHARED YEARS WITH..HE ISNT MOTIVATED TO LOVE ME..LIKE I DESERVE..I WANNA FEEL LIKE A WOMAN.. I WANNA FEEL THAT LOVE..NOT JUS HEAR IT..I WANNA ENJOY LIFE BEFORE ITS TOO LATE..I FEEL SELFISH..BUT I DESERVE TOO..HE EVEN DESERVE TO HAVE SOME ONE WITH COMMON LOVE GOALS..BECAUSE ME I LOVE HARD..I WANNA TOUCH THE DEPTHS OF EACH OTHERS SOUL..I WANT A LOVE THAT CAN BE SEEN AND NOT TOUCHED..I WANT A BOND A BAILSMAN CANT BREAK..I WANT EVERYBODY TO KNOW ITS REAL NOT FAKE..MAYBE IM JUS DREAMING..HOPING THINGS INTO REALITY..BUT I WONT LET THIS LOVE THING CAPTURE ME..

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KingQadarDwon'

Beautiful piece.. In search of the ultimate respect.. Write on.. I enjoyed reading..

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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hymnagen

Something we all can relate to. Nice piece

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