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just different 1 min read 539 views Apr 2, 2015

Discombobulated

Analyze and observe, patience takes nerve, f**k what you heard, it's serve or get served, plenty premonitions, some call it intuition, very superficial on superstition, now look pay attention, non-religious do you get this, I write alright to give you sort of a sight, outside looking in, my freedoms a pen, and a ear listening in, I am whistling for men, winds of words much accredited and deserved, a standing ovation, technique on relations, my main demonstration, enlightened sensations, a give you chills if you choose whats false in illusion, it's real my thoughts a bring you this conclusion, lost in my sauce of confusion,

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Ms.PoeticPassion

Good write!

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Tight spit! #Salute

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