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Ms.Toya2
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lightness in the dark

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So there's this girl

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So there's this girl 

Who is lost in this world

She walks around 

Looking down at the ground

Nobody even cares 

So she never shares

But truth is she's hurt 

Always feeling lower than dirt

In the shower crying

Feeling tired of trying

She yells inside

Getting kinda hard to hide

So will somebody help her

Somebody love her

She's looking for you

Will you come thru? 

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xclusive says:

Well said. Nice write.

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Ms.Toya2 says:

Thank you

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msmaja187 says:

I'm one of those girls. Maybe if we looked up every now and then we'd see we're not alone. Love this peace

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EmpressRee says:

a piece that I related to back in my high school days and now 10 years later can still feel that

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rie_cee says:

Nice write!

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2b2b2 says:

Superb Capture....ONE
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The Immortal Wize says:

Poignant!

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Coloured_Asian says:

I like this it's raw and real

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Kingqadardwon' says:

This is a Gem! The story of many women lives.. Outstanding write.

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