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DeeliteNMe
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lightness in the dark
I am in need some inspiration...maybe I'm trying too hard!

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life

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I have an inquisitive nature. I seek to explore all the knowledge that I can find. When the subject turned to you, I was the best student I could be. I studied you, wanted to learn you...but your teaching I just couldn't follow. In your syllabus, you described all the details that I could look forward to. Like how loving you are, intellectual conversations we could engage in, quality time you like to spend. But as the class began, the more lost I became. Your instruction left me angry because I felt so inadequate. Always a good student, i found myself flunking out of your class. Seeking extra help so that I could make an attempt to understand, you were nowhere to be found. I found myself berating myself about how foolish I was. After a few failed attempts I ultimately decided to drop your class. I'm so glad I did, for I realized that you were not who you said you were. For me it's another lesson learned in this transcript called life!

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DallasCowgirl says:

Dopeness! This was mad good

 

DeeliteNMe says:

Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate it!!

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2b2b2 says:

Excellent Capture.....well played....ONE
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hymnagen says:

These words drew me in and never let go. Very nice
 

DeeliteNMe says:

All of your feedback means the world to me!!! It just makes me want to continue writing!!!

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