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life 1 min read 491 views May 7, 2015

The Devil Taking Over

I'm crying this road is tuff Im dieing but I'm trying my best not to give up I'm at the point in my life were im feeling stuck im crying feels like I have no luck Lord rescue me before the devil takes control of my soul and never do I wanna go down that road I'm dieing my soul feels like a Match waiting to be struck my eyes are burning cause my anger is building up frustrated mind that can lead to a life of crime im starting to feel like one big ball of flames hotter then the sun it self steam coming out my nostril like a raging bull so Lord I look up to you and ask you please don't forget about your son I'm writing you this so you can never say I didn't come to you first so Lord please drop a great big bucket of holy water on this huge ball of flame!!

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LP45

Very nice Tmartin, I'm sure may of us have had these same sentiments. I can relate.

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